Bittersweet Fools Episode 1

Well, here is the first episode from the Visual Novel Bittersweet Fools. Consider this a demo of sorts, because the full game is a long way off. To make this translation possible, I had to rip and remake the entire game in another engine, since the game proved very hard to hack.

DDL Link:
https://mega.nz/#!7Y8kiKqR!yx1TDa\_Yr3zk3SWyKmlzAbLAgQsf2c6b5DXmtj7zeVo

Now I know the translation is not the best, nor is the wording. But I’m not an english teacher so I’m not entire sure how all the dialog should flow, but that’s what feedback is for. I’d love to hear what you guys think about the game and the translation.