[Serenae] Mahoutsukai Precure!! ~Mirai Days~ - 07 (1080p).mkv

Whoops, timing mistake at 3:25, will fix that for the v2.

ty!

Thanks!

A bunch of food-for-thought suggestions today; sorry.

03:25: when you do adjust the timing, consider also splitting or {\an8}ing the line to avoid obscuring the book (although it’s still visible briefly a few lines later)

10:06: sk → ks

10:32: consider singular “Girl” (imo you’ve been making Sara’s lines sound like she’s believed to be a single girl, although upon rereading, it seems you have her say “that girl”, hmm. I’ve been reading it as “the girl from the rumours”, but I guess that’s only one possible interpretation)

13:24: consider “we”

15:46: just in case, I think this is 傀儡

16:55: consider “[revived/awoken/back in action] thanks to her power” (you have “revived” at 05:49 fwiw)

Also consider adding a few commas (spotted while looking around the ASS): 20:39: before “I guess” 21:32: after “yeah”

Finally, FYI I’ve posted yet another suggestion back on episode 5 that I spotted earlier this week; sorry! Of course, if you’ve already seen it and disagreed, that’s entirely fine.

Thanks as always! Food-for-thought suggestions are just as welcome. I'll take a look at the ep5 comments again too!